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The Green-Wigged Stranger

Archive Guest · 6 pages

Comic

Lower East Side, midnight: Is this another dead end for Benny Profane?

Benny Profane stands near the club entrance, raincoat damp, neon and fog outside, inside a smoky basement packed with hipsters and band equipment. The stage is awash in green and blue light, a crowd blurs in the gloom.
establish place, mood, question1 / 6
Benny leans against a pillar as a woman with a green wig and fishnets appears beside him, face half-shadowed.
You one of the Crew?Benny Profane
I show up. Sometimes that’s enough.Benny Profane
The woman offers Benny a cigarette, flame illuminating her face. He accepts.
You have a name?Benny Profane
Depends who’s asking.Benny Profane
human beat: meeting the stranger2 / 6
The band plays on stage as Benny and the woman watch, crowd pressed close.
You’re not like them.Benny Profane
Never have been. Not quite one of anything.Benny Profane
Rachel Owlglass watches from a table, worried, as Stencil scribbles notes at the bar.
He always finds trouble.Rachel Owlglass
Benny and the woman stand close; her lips nearly touch his ear.
There’s a story here. Do you want to find it?Benny Profane
escalate: tension and invitation3 / 6
Benny, hesitant, nods as the woman smiles and leads him by the hand into the crowd.
Alright. Lead the way.Benny Profane
Rohearn watches from the doorway, arms folded, suspicious.
He’s getting in over his head.Rohearn
the turn: Benny decides to follow4 / 6
Benny and the woman climb the club stairs and exit into the rain-soaked city, neon blurring through fog.
What now?Benny Profane
Now you find out what you’re looking for.Benny Profane
climax: out into the city, possibility5 / 6

The city waits, and so does the answer.

Benny and the woman walk away down the glistening street, backs to the viewer, city stretching ahead.
Maybe this is a beginning.Benny Profane
aftermath, emotional button, sequel hook6 / 6
Chapter prose
Benny Profane found himself once again adrift in the Lower East Side, rain-slicked streets smeared with the echo of neon. He slouched along the sidewalk, hands shoved deep in his battered Navy jacket, following the distant thrum of a bass line leaking up the subway steps. The city was a palimpsest tonight—old brick, new noise, and Benny floating somewhere in between, neither anchored nor quite lost. He ducked into the subterranean club, the air inside thick with sweat, cigarette smoke, and the metallic tang of amplifier hum. The stage lights burned in unnatural colors, throwing long shadows against a wall papered in band flyers and bad poetry. The Whole Sick Crew was on, or some version of them—Benny could make out Shale singing into the mic, Paola on drums, and what must have been Pig Bodine thumping out a bass line that made the floor tremble. A knot of regulars howled approval, the rest swayed in that familiar, ironic detachment that passed for enthusiasm downtown. Benny leaned against a sticky pillar, surveying the scene. He wasn’t looking for anything. He never was. And then she appeared beside him: tall, pale, in a black mesh dress with laddered fishnets and a cascade of synthetic green hair tumbling over one shoulder. Her gaze was direct, appraising—blue eyes ringed with heavy liner, lips quirked in amusement. She looked like the promise of trouble—and Benny, as ever, was susceptible to promises he knew would break. “You one of the Crew?” she asked, voice half-mocking, half-invitation. Benny shrugged. “I show up. Sometimes that’s enough.” She laughed, sharp as glass. “You look like you’re waiting for the world to end.” “Maybe I am,” he replied. “Maybe I missed it.” They watched the band in mutual silence, the noise swelling around them. Stencil would say this was significant, that meetings were never accidental. Profane doubted it. Still, when she offered him a cigarette from a battered case, he took it and let her light it, the flame illuminating her features for a heartbeat. Rainwater dripped from the ceiling, pooling at their feet. “You have a name?” he asked. She grinned, tucking the lighter away. “Depends who’s asking.” “I’m Benny,” he said, feeling suddenly foolish. She tipped her head toward the stage. “You’re not like them.” “Never have been,” said Benny. “Not quite one of anything.” The band finished a song, and the crowd erupted. Stencil hovered at the bar, scribbling in his notebook, Rachel watched from a table, her eyes anxious. Even Rohearn lurked in the doorway, glowering at the scene. For once, Benny did not feel like an outsider. The green-wigged woman leaned close, her lips brushing his ear. “There’s a story here,” she whispered. “Do you want to find it?” He hesitated, then nodded. She smiled, and led him into the shifting crowd. Outside, rain hammered the city. Benny followed, heart pounding, wondering if this was another of Stencil’s clues, another false trail—or something else entirely. Above the city, the lights blurred and bled, the night thick with possibilities. Profane didn’t know what he was searching for. But for once, he was willing to be found.
Original idea

Benny Profane meets up with a mysterious woman in fishnets and a green wig at an underground rock concert on the Lower East Side where members of the Whole Sick Crew are playing.